Wednesday, September 24, 2014

Throne of Jade by Naomi Novik



Throne of Jade
Temeraire – Book 2
Publisher: Random House Publishing Group as Del Ray (2006)
Author: Naomi Novik
Genre: Fantasy, Historical Fiction
Pages: 398
Price: $7.99

When Britain intercepted a French chip and its precious cargo—an unhatched dragon's egg—Capt. Will Laurence of HMS Reliant unexpectedly became master and commander of the noble dragon he named Temeraire. As new recruits in Britain's Aerial Corps, man and dragon soon proved their mettle in daring combat against Bonaparte's invading forces.

Now China has discovered that its rare gift, intended for Napoleon, has fallen into British hands—and an angry Chinese delegation vows to reclaim the remarkable beast. But Laurence refuses to cooperate. Facing the gallows for his defiance, Laurence has no choice but to accompany Temeraire back to the Far East—a long voyage fraught with peril, intrigue, and the untold terrors of the deep. Yet once the pair reaches the court of the Chinese emperor, even more shocking discoveries and darker dangers await.

I made a mid-week trip to the bookstore to purchase books two and three of Naomi Novik's Temeraire series. I don't generally do that, I have plenty of spare reading material around the house, but every now and then a series will grab me hard enough that I have to keep with it until it has played itself out. It was with that enthusiasm that I started Throne of Jade.

Mrs. Novik corrected some of the things that were a little grating about the first book. There is far less pet name usage from Laurence towards Temeraire, it's still there, but no where near as prevalent as in the first book. Will Laurence has loosened up a little bit, losing some of his stuffiness to the laid back nature of the Aerial Corps, he's still more proper than those around him, but it's more tolerable than it was before. The author has retained her ability to describe to the reader the customs, practices and general setting of the 19th Century, now expanded to another nation that is very different from the England the reader came to know in book one.

Because the book moves the setting of the series across a vast distance, and because of the nature of travel at the time, much of the story takes place on a ship. This was a double edged sword. On one hand we got to see a side of Laurence that we only briefly encountered in the first book, a side showing him in his more natural environment aboard a ship. On the other hand, this requires a good deal of the book to take place during travel. Requires might be a little too strong a word, as it seems some changes to the story could have alleviated the ocean-going monotony.

The main dilemma in this story is the question of where Temeraire will end up, and how that will effect the relations between Britain and China. The course of those relations is set into motion very early in the book, and resolves itself quite nicely at the end. The space in between falls into a trap common in fantasy literature; the dreaded travelogue. What occurs during the long travel sequence feels like a series of encounters dreamt up by your dungeon master at your last Dungeons and Dragons session. Concerns over food, sickness, disagreements between traveling companions, and sea monster attacks roll by one after the other, only very occasionally emphasizing a point that couldn't have been better emphasized elsewhere. The one moment of revelation for Temeraire during the journey was rendered unnecessary by his first visit to a Chinese city, the point being made more strongly and in a better fashion than it was before.

The major fighting sequences in the book are well told and filled with tension. While the reader can be fairly sure that Laurence will make it through the violent encounters safely, the same cannot be said for the rest of his crew. Mrs. Novik has shown a willingness to shed supporting characters as needed to lend weight to the battles Laurence and Temeraire fight. My hope going forward is that some of those side characters are fleshed out a little more, so they don't feel so much like red shirts on an away team.

Conclusion: This is an adequate follow up to His Majesty's Dragon. Where the author made progress in some areas, curtailing some of the characters more annoying characteristics; she also fell into some of the storytelling styles common in fantasy that she had avoided in the first book. This seemed to bloat what would otherwise have been a more concise and streamlined story.

Rating: 7/10

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